Writing workshops with Mayank

My nephew Mayank is nine years old, full of energy and jumped around many times as we recorded his experiences of a recent trip to Agra region-The Fatehpur Sikri and Taj Group of monuments.


His is an innocent world-He was once very unhappy that I found my passport https://prashantbhatt.wordpress.com/2008/12/23/innocence/ as now, I would have to leave and no one would take him to the zoo.

Tell me about your trip

The question left him a bit bewildered. He reached out for the book on Mughals which he has. I put the book aside.

“ I want to know your experience of Fatehpur Sikri and Taj group of monuments, not what you can read from a book,” I told him trying to initiate him into the writing-reflecting mode.

A life unexamined, is a life not lived-a philosopher once said.

 Hence we started on a joint journey together, revisiting the Panch and Hawa Mahals, recalling stories which the guide at Sikri told and remembering the reflections of the pond in front of the mausoleum of the Sufi saint Sheikh Salim Chisthi.The 19th century French writer Victor Hugo once commented on Birbal Bhawan that either it was a very small palace or a very large jewelry box.“I saw a goat near the Buland Darwaza” he recalled with great excitement.

Papa’s college-Fruity at a stall

Every trip has its unique points. “Our driver lost his sim card, which he later found in the backseat.”

“We went to Papa’s medical college. There are a lot of monkeys in the campus.There was pindrop silence in the library.”

Little Mayank was slowly warming up to the little details which were initially not present in his narrative.

Who is more important-the architect or the emperor?

 I tried to tease out his mind on the relative importance of the architect who designed the Taj Mahal and the emperor under whose rule it was built.

( The Venetian Geronimo Veroneo and Ustad Ahmed Isa Afandi are the chief contestants proposed for the credit of chief architect though only a group of masterminds in architecture could have put together the myriads of drawings and plans).

Mayank answered my stressing the importance of the architect by asking –

“If the Emperor and the Architect are wounded by an arrow, and there is only one bed to treat them, who will you treat?”

Shivaji’s escape

Agra Fort’s most famous prisoner was Shah Jahan. However, Mayank found the tale of Shivaji’s escape from captivity more exciting and recalled the events of May –July 1666. He has been seeing the serial Vir-Shivaji very closely (eats food only while watching the serial) and hence this part of history of Agra Fort especially appealed to him.

Recalling and reflecting

Writing workshops are an interesting way to organize thoughts especially for children. He later recalled many other trips.

Nainital. Vaishnodevi.Mumbai.Shimla.


Jallianwala Bagh

Golden Temple-Amritsar, Our family has prayed here for many generations.

Though initially hesitant, we spent some nice hours remembering some unique moments



About prashant bhatt

A psychologist, interested in mindfulness practices. I practiced medicine as a radiologist for 23 years in India and Libya as a radiologist before shifting to Canada. A regular diarist, journaling since 1983 Reading journal : gracereadings.com
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3 Responses to Writing workshops with Mayank

  1. Sagar Prashant Bhatt says:

    Very good article papa.

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